Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Today, the law is for everyone and for everything. Laws are made for people to follow it helps to make a good society. Therefore, it helps to differentiate human and animals. Thus, humans are homo-sapiens. In this essay, we will discuss believe that laws change human behavior.
Firstly, laws help people to be in limit and protective. Law helps human to follow rules and regulation made by the government. For example, traffic rules, instances fines are levied for jumping red light this will make people fear and obedience the rules of traffic. It exemplifies, that law force a human to follow rules and regulation.
Secondly, moreover, the law brings responsibility among the human. For example, restriction over drinking alcohol in public place or age restriction less than 21, punishment over parole, environment duties. It exemplifies, that the rules make a person responsible. They follow rules for their safety and this makes the difference between humans and animals. The law changes human behavior.
In the conclusion, the law change human behavior and they made them responsible and obedient. Therefore, it is shown the changes of human behavior. Thus, everyone has to follow the rules made by the government it will benefit them. They made the environment safe and place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the environment safe and place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80899510764 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4054773599 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8333333333 104.977214359 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272422889063 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122674692683 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12382392505 0.071462118173 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19220969729 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479238842927 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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