Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
These days, it has become a growing trend for people to change their behavior because of different laws implementation, thanks to the government for embossing these laws in their country. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
At the outset, there is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that in order to decrease the crime rate in any country from stealing to snatching and murdering to kidnapping, it is very important to emboss strict laws, rules and regulations. Not only can laws force people to stay away from the crime, but can also change the behavior and way of their living.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the benefits of embossing the laws. The primary one stems from the fact that in order to take important decisions in life, these law enforcement becomes barrier in making decisions. Besides, some laws are not human related, but still effects human behavior which includes animals rights, corporate social responsibility and environmental law.
In views of the above outlined arguments, one can conclude that the benefits of implementing laws in different countries are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...nge their behavior because of different laws implementation, thanks to the governmen...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this law' or 'these laws'?
Suggestion: this law; these laws
...er to take important decisions in life, these law enforcement becomes barrier in making d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01401869159 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68834582024 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602803738318 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0126244515 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214536596624 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783844849811 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852011922138 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116454326682 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577322898711 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.0 Out of 90
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