Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Some people believe that laws change human behavior was always a controversial topic. Many countries around the globe claim that strict policies are only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace and security. I strongly agree with the statement that human way of behaving is governed by certain regulations. This essay would further elaborate how legislation's play a major role in controlling people with justifying reasons and examples.
First and foremost, strict rules make countries better and people respond to a situation in an orderly manner. Countries with stringent government rules have minimum crime rate. For instance, in Singapore, smuggling goods is a criminal offence and one has to face death penalty if they found, therefore such activities hardly takes place there. This example exemplifies that legislation's can alter people's behavior. Thus, it can be concluded that there is an obvious link between rules and human response.
Furthermore, in the UAE, kissing in public is a punishable act. Every citizen of this country is aware of this law and it's hard to find anyone breaking this and it is represented as culture of the country. This example clearly shows as that absence of law may create an unfavorable environment for the smooth functioning of the society.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that there is a strong correlation between government rules and attitude of mankind. It has been proven that many countries use law as major tool for peace and security measures. It is predicted that in near future every country will implement strict rules for development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...etter and people respond to a situation in an orderly manner. Countries with stringent government ru...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'break'.
Suggestion: break
...of this law and its hard to find anyone breaking this and it is represented as culture o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2679245283 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81822881795 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2266970073 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0666666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214335088357 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738972628475 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115672170811 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12260828077 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118708464821 0.0609392437508 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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