Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
In the contemporary times, the law brings great changes in human behaviour which has positive as well as negative impact on society. Today, the law is implemented for everyone that makes people different from animals. I believe that law is necessary and it brings change in human behaviour. This will explain with pertinent examples and aspects in further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reason in favour of my stance, the most prominent one is that people adhered to the rules and regulations and become obedient. Taking an instance of traffic rules, if a person does not follow the traffic rules, this will be detrimental to the human life. This example clearly shows that the fear of penalty and punishment bound the person to follow rules.
In order to comprehend the above fact, there is another pivotal aspect when law brings responsibility to a person. For example ban on alcohol, clean environment, ban on smoking at some places. These rules exemplify how people become responsible. Hence, it proves that law change human behaviour.
On the contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that law has a negative effect on human behaviour. Like, an employment law is positive to an employee but negative to an employer.
In conclusion, despite few negative aspects, it is true that people become responsible and obedient. So, we can say that law changes the human behaviour in a positive direction. And, it is recommended that law should be enacted and human should follow those rules to make the world peaceful and friendly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06225680934 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69601233125 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1976838588 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3125 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275842419421 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974576148087 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794402753775 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15557621815 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732809553379 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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