Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
In the contemporary times, the law brings great changes in human behaviour which has positive as well as negative impact on society. Today, the law is implemented for everyone that makes people different from animals. I believe that law is necessary and it brings change in human behaviour. This will explain with pertinent examples and aspects in further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reason in favour of my stance, the most prominent one is that people adhered to the rules and regulations and become obedient. Taking an instance of traffic rules, if a person does not follow the traffic rules, this will be detrimental to the human life. This example clearly shows that the fear of penalty and punishment bound the person to follow rules.
In order to comprehend the above fact, there is another pivotal aspect where law brings responsibility to a person. A ban on alcohol, keeping a clean environment, ban on smoking at some places. These rules exemplify how people become responsible and hence proves that law change human behaviour.
In conclusion, we can say that law changes the human behaviour in a positive direction. And, it is recommended that law should be enacted and human should follow those rules to make the world peaceful and friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66983230469 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9768406778 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270726087059 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101794531739 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831690288259 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160602611354 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798773799992 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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