Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Law is a system that regulates individual or community of society adhere to the will of the state. Implementation of laws has positive as well as negative consequences on the human behaviour. In the contemporary times, law is there for everyone. To a larger extent, I agree that law brings revolution in human behavior and it differentiate the human from animals. This will explain with pertinent examples and aspects in further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reason in favour of my stance, the most prominent one is that people adhere to the rules and regulations and become obedient. For instance, if a person does not follow the traffic rules, this will be detrimental to human life. This example clearly shows that the fear of penalty and punishment bound the person to follow rules.
Another pivotal aspect is that law brings responsibility to a person. For example, ban on alchohal, clean environment, ban on smoking at some places. These rules exemplifies how people become responsible. Furthermore, it enforce justice and carry the power to recover penalties on failure. Hence, it proves that law change human behaviour.
On analysing the above reasons, it is clear that people become responsible and obedient. In conclusion, we can say that law changes the human behaviour in a positive direction. And, it is recommended that law should be enacted and human should follow those rules to make the world peaceful and friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1313559322 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89196389765 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5415562124 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6875 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278063706666 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08446740372 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723897647714 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158628075641 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714478908099 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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