Some people think that technology improves the quality of life whereas others feel that creates a new problem that threatens the quality of life. Discuss both views and suggest your opinion.
With the dramatic boom in technology, there is a rapid change in the quality of life. Though there are a great number of people who interpret the advancement in technology as the constructive and positive impact on quality of life but others maintain that it is detrimental to the quality of life. And, I am inclined to believe that the benefits of technology overweigh its problems. This will explain with pertinent examples and aspects in further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reasons in favour of my stance, one of the most prominent supporting reason is technology has accelerated the medical field. For instance, treatment of disease like Cancer was near to impossible but technology in science made it possible, this improves the health. Furthermore, an Internet that connects the world and subsequently makes it a global village. Thereby, technology improves health and knowledge of the person which will eventually improve the quality of life.
On contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that the technology is responsible for the drastic change in environment. Despite the fact that through technology one can easily commute from one part of the world to other, on the other hand, the bitter truth is that this has risen the pollution level and have adverse effects on health. This is sometimes equivalent to inhaling of 10 cigarettes a day. Hence, this illustrates that it has the threat to the life.
In conclusion, everything has pros and cons. We must be vigilant to eliminate the cons and this is possible if we can have right perception and perspective towards the use of technology. In addition, individual and government should pay attention and take preventive measures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88914223553 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6291133196 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219156456403 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666790065518 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915591380455 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121869674294 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938328544502 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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