Some people think that technology improves the quality of life whereas others feel that creates a new problem that threatens the quality of life. Discuss both views and suggest your opinion.
With the dramatic boom in technology, there is a rapid change in the quality of life. Though there are a great number of people who interpret the advancement in technology as the constructive and positive impact on quality of life but others maintain that it is detrimental to the quality of life. And, I am inclined to believe that the benefits of technology overweigh its problems. This will explain with pertinent examples and aspects in further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reasons in favour of my stance, one of the most prominent supporting reason is technology has a pivotal role in the medical field. For instance, treatment of disease like Cancer was near to impossible but technology in science made it possible, this improves the health. Next, an Internet that connects the world and subsequently makes it a global village. Thereby, technology improves health and knowledge of the person which will eventually improve the quality of life.
On contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that the technology is responsible for the drastic change in environment. Despite the fact that through technology one can easily commute from one part of the world to other, but along with that the bitter truth is that this has risen the pollution level and have adverse effects on health.This is sometimes equivalent to inhaling 10 cigarettes a day. Hence, this illustrates that it has the threat to the life.
In conclusion, everything has pros and cons. We must be vigilant to eliminate the cons and this is possible if we can have right perception and perspective towards the use of technology. In addition, individual and government should pay attention and take preventive measures.
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10676156584 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86023601986 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3293680811 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214901855542 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696915240113 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093414305967 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118793531205 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949691175799 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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