Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Laws are built for people to provide ease of livelihood and manage the regime's regulation. Some people believe that laws have significant potential to change the human behavior and other group argue laws are baseless and biased and do not have any influences on daily general life. This essay will discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, laws made by human are lied in society in this world to make life easier and manageable. There are several influences on human to direct to positive and apt way in individual life. For instance, driving a vehicle driver license is mandatory, fine on littering a public area, penalize on shop-lifting etc. Within these laws, a society can grow and eventually nation grows. Norms always have profound result with positive influences on individual. People believe that laws provide a structure to people and secure their rights in terms do's and don't.
On contrary, people argue that laws provide adverse impact and do not possess any fundamental facts have a different view. They also argue that some laws do not provide liberty to them and cause corruption in societies by embezzlement of human relation in term of bad impact. The harassment of under privileged people occur more deliberately as sabotage from laws. It can be also claimed that human behavior change a lot upon laws if laws create fuss and split the society into a dictatorship.
In recapitulate, this essay discussed both views of this argument. In my personal opinion, laws are blood nerve which provide a positive impact and manage livelihood in better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03717472119 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62525659602 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0912587614 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34385491514 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102326889987 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100975898788 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199443828664 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107116053397 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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