Ultra-violent sports such as UFC are extremely polarizing. Some people believe they should be banned outright because they promote violence while others think they actually provide a safe arena to express natural human aggression.
The Ultimate Fighting Championship (UFC) is the most controversial sport on the planet. On the one hand, there are some individuals say that certain sports should never be played at all since they glorify aggression and are seen to encourage violence. Others, On the other hand, contend that these activities allow people to channel their energy in a safe setting and allow them to express their inherently aggression issues. I partially agree with the statement.
To begin, it is irrefutable fact that ultra-violent sports might be regarded as celebrating aggression and fostering violence. This is particularly troubling for children, who could be influenced by the behavior they observe in these sports and try to replicate them in day to day life. Additionally, the nature of these sports can result in serious injuries, making them potential threat to their long-term health.
However, supporters of these sports argue that they offer participants a safe space to express their natural human aggression in a supervised environment. The individual may then use this as a release, which may help them prevent from acting violently in other areas of their lives. Moreover, these sports have strict rules and regulation in place to ensure the safety of the participants, making them much safer than street fights or other forms of unorganized violence.
In conclusion, the debate over ultra-violent sports such as UFC is a complex. Although violent-related sports can help people to some extent, I believe that they should be restricted on TV programs and international sporting contests, however people can still take part in those sports under a safe environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97818339961 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9615868408 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317473235471 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110351423891 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759899260503 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198853285035 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552182698697 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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