Some people believe that war is inevitable outcome of life. However, others believe that commerce and geopolitics have the power to unite us.
Discuss the view and support it with reasons or examples from your own experiences.
Human history is full of episodes of war. It is considered by many that war is an inevitable outcome of living, however others believe that trade and geopolitics can unite us. This essay will argue that despite international trades and geopolitics relationship among various nations, war is inevitable.
The international trades and geopolitics have not that much power to avoid wars. In the world of globalization, almost every nations trade with each other and also maintain a geopolitics relationship with each other, but it doesn't gives the guarantee of stopping the wars. India and Pakistan, for instance, trade with each other but there is also a ongoing war continuing since many decades. Thus, these trades and geopolitics relationships are not quite efficient in avoiding the wars between nations.
Having said that, we human beings are tribal by nature and a sense of war is already inbuilt within us. Since ages, people are fighting for small concerns and that take the form of big war. For example, the civil war of Syria has emerged in its own country which has exploited its own citizens. In short, most of the people in this world are not in favor of war but still is an inevitable outcome of our life.
This essay has argued how international trades and geopolitics are only efficient on surface level and is not able to stop wars and it is really an unavoidable result in our life. In my opinion, war is quite inevitable due to the tribal nature of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86220472441 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69463096213 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6112470968 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 2.75862068966 471% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260793757219 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096587044068 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621403667481 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157452693088 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456586623414 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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