Some people believe that war is the inevitable outcome where some believe that commerce and geopolitics have power to unite us. Discuss your view and support it with reasons/examples from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Wars always have been shameful act to the humanity and human history is full of episodes of wars and aggression. Some people believe that was is avoidable. While others argue that commerce and geopolitics have power to unite us. I am inclined to believe that if countries are connected though business and geopolitics despites this war is unavoidable. This essay will discuss why war is inevitable and provide a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, wars can be avoided if we connect through trade and geopolitics. But, this is also seen that trades deal and political connections usually do not last as these forces can be seen to be temporarily solution for countries. For example, India and Pakistan have connected through globally trades and politics. Despite this, there is no evidence to suggest that these alliances will persist.
To continue with, war is deeper issue than surface politics and temporary business deals. We humans are tribal in nature and always fighting on individual, group, city and nation issues where war is not a micro issue it is a macro issue. People need to think about humanity beyond the borders, regions, castes and understand wars create chaos for our world. For instance, we can see traces of wars in form of aggression and anger. I think that if human destroy these kinds of emotions then wars would be avoidable, but until then, it will remain an inevitable outcome of living.
In conclusion. The forgoing discussion propounds the view that trade and geopolitics are only temporary guards against warfare. In my opinion, war is part of human nature and as such as it’s an unavoidable outcome of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65463013564 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0314165109 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5625 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 2.75862068966 471% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207031896161 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704457866111 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675983451021 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127376380832 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979774817615 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.