Some people believes law changes human behavior? Do you agree or disagree?
The role of laws in bringing a positive change in people's behaviour is widely debated, with many people
claiming that human behaviour is rarely affected by enforcing stringent rule-setting. However, I do not
entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous argument lies in the fact
that rigorous rules can engender fear among miscreants, who mostly commit crimes because of the leeway
they enjoy in breaking the law. Not only do these stringent rules make people aware that their illegal or
unlawful activities will result in severe punishment such as financial penalty, jail term or even death
sentence, but the likelihood that they will indulge in criminal activities is also bound to decline. Needless to
say, all these benefits stand people in good stead, as far as making them disciplined is concerned.
Another argument in favour of rule-setting can be seen in childhood, when a child learns to do things
following a proper order set either by their parents or by their teachers. Besides, by sticking to these rules
and regulations, children not only learn essential attributes like discipline and punctuality, but also excel in
academic studies. Hence, it is apparent why many believe that human behaviour is immensely shaped by
law and order.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of strict rules in shaping
human behaviour is instrumental indeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...plain why in this essay. There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21721311475 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72647581766 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5812272171 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157075557543 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586500378998 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586687048829 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047266824735 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611220718285 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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