In this day and age,there are an ongoing debate among people all around the world about succsess. While there are certainly valid arguments to claim that succsess lies in gain professional and economic targets, my view is that succsess is being with family and good friends. In this essay I would describe both side of arguments.
To begin with there are several reasons why I support sucsees lies in being with family.First and foremost is that if you are more rich and have appropriate social position in society, there would not be any gurantee to be happy. A group of social researchers at Harvard University undertook a study on two groups of different people, the reasult revealed that those who more rich are more depress due to the less free time and large sums of busy mind. The more busy you are,the less happy you would be.
On the other hand,it should be mentioned that happiness is not something except enjoy your time with your family. Although the statistics have shown more ecomic goals play pivotal role in people's happiness , the lost chain of sucsses lies in being happy.There are many contributing factors for socsess such as ,health and happiness. Economic targets an perfessional accievment not only bring sucsess,but also bring more depression.
To conclude,while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that succsees and happiness is lies in being with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04219409283 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63843131843 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611814345992 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9689156443 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155441328145 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607506759722 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464693112729 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976012175453 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161034552607 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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