Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why?
Recently, the phenomenon of doing sports as a team or in person and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although exercising in teams is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that this issue can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, the idea of exercising and playing sports as a team group provides the society with the noticeable effects. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, sports teams have a paramount ability to enhance and develop some crucial skills including teamwork, intellectual and communicable skills. Moreover, members in sports teams have the fierce competion with each other which can lead to increase their effectiveness and productivity. Furthermore, players who are in the same team can address their difficulties by engaging in debates or motivate each other in order to bloster their abilities and capabilities.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of doing individual sports has some advocates. According to research undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university the probability of success in individual sport player is more than the ones who play as a team. They asserted that coordinating the team members is strain and the fault of each person contribute to all and it might lead failure. In addition, doing sports in person can increase the confidence and enhance concentration.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of training and playing in teams are far more outweigh the playing in person.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32404181185 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10340903532 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5462730056 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170792847024 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601711670395 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361652951548 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108192172668 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256223636279 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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