Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws others think laws have little effect What is your opinion

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Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws, others think laws have little effect. What is your opinion?

Recently, human behaviors have sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "is it advantageous or not?". Whereas it is a widely held view that lawful acts are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the psychological standpoint, lawful acts are bound up inextricably with the effective law which indicates they lead to legal limitations. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between legal limitations and antisocial behaviors. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of law enforcement is correlated positively with lawful acts.
Within the realm of sociology, without the slightest doubt, the effective law attributes to lawful acts in that it would come down to legal restrictions. A salient example of such attribution is legal limitations, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take abnormal behaviors for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint social problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of human behaviors.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of human behaviors are of more significance.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ying goes 'alls well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65753424658 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26846240294 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8969025134 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205695320175 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728037615273 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433137227673 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11211095995 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315032140687 0.0609392437508 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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