Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, self-study education has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the Pros and Cons of self-study?". Whereas it is a widely held view that is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the education standpoint, student’s participation is bound up inextricably with traditional class, which indicates they lead to both mutual interaction and conservation. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between traditional teaching methods and oral examination as well as an exponential increase in student's performance. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of private schools is correlated positively with not only examination booklet but also course syllabus.
Within the realm of psychology, without the slightest doubt, self-study attribute to isolated environment, in that it would come down to depression, anxiety, and soliloquy. A salient example of such attribution is distance learning, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take remote places for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint not face to face communication problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to written examination, team working, and even correct time scheduling. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of influences of traditional schools and educational system on social behavior and reducing unacceptable social traits.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the drawbacks of self-study far outweigh its benefits. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1207.87684729 144% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95890410959 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35874935396 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695205479452 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2742412355 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164503454334 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461007920518 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540328387472 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964893760595 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344800779334 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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