Some people think that it would be better for large companies and
industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.
Others believe that companies and industries should remain in
more urban areas.
Cities are growing and so are regional centres due to expanding
populations and the need for places for people to work and live. Some
people think that companies and industries should move to regional
centres while others think that they should remain in the cities. I believe
that the best idea is for regional areas to be developed and that companies
and industries should move out of the cities.
A move by companies and industries to regional areas will take some of
the working city population with them. This has the advantage of relieving
city overcrowding and the pressure on the infrastructure that is already
stressed. For example, taking manufacturing plants to regional areas
creates work and encourages families to live and work in these centres. In
my mind, relieving the crowding in cities is a sensible and practical solution
to many urban issues.
To reduce pollution and keep cities cleaner and healthier it is a good idea
to encourage companies to move and operate in regional areas.
Traditionally, many industries and companies set up business
headquarters in the city, but as time has changed the need to be city
based has diminished. For example, car-manufacturing plants no longer
need to be based in urban areas, and are able to relocate to well
supported regional areas taking with them associated pollution problems.
For a healthier city it is good that industry and companies move outside of
the city.
This essay has argued that moving companies and industry to regional
areas may be practical and create healthier cities. In my opinion, relocating
companies to these developing regional areas will benefit those who work
for these businesses and the cities that they leave behind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... industries to regional areas will take some of the working city population with them. This...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.814729575 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457446808511 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9517878313 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378952454319 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156547061635 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948165437036 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118807244223 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104962422672 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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