Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Human behavior is measurable by person's thinking and the action. Some people think that law has a strong impact on human's life. In my opinion, ones' attitude and mindset play a major role in his or her behavior. Law is something which is followed by the human in order to be with society. These laws can have the impact on the way a mankind choose his or her lifestyle.
At the outset, we are living in a country where governments enact laws and to be followed by the human beings. Such laws should be strict and stringent so nobody can misuse. Breaking any law should result in strict action against the criminal. Thus, laws help maintain the discipline in the society. For example, traffic rules should be followed by people which in result minimize the accident rates.
Additionally, laws help to combat the corruption among the people engaged with the various department of the system. People of the constitution should respect the laws and follow them sincerely, which results in a strong and developed country wherein people can live their life without any fear. For example, nowadays security of women has become a major issue across the globe. If a mankind understands the laws and builds enough fear for any wrongdoing, then surely the ratio of crimes will go down.
To conclude, in my reckon, the human behavior depends on their education and their upbringing but having strict law can change their behavior as they know their consequences to breaking them. Moreover, such laws inculcate humans to be in disciple and treat others with dignity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89433962264 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49978283144 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6908823239 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277516312789 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100177315417 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864412489408 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174993852012 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727298253949 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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