Some people think law changes our behavior. Discuss.
The effects of law on human behaviour as a compulsory issue, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of law has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on some nations in which following the law has become compulsory in recent years. It can be agreed that implementation of law has some positive impacts on our behaviour, but some people claim that it has negative impact as well. This essay will elaborate how following the law changes our behaviour and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why law affects our behaviour, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that following the law is a civic responsibility, therefore, people who follow the law are more concerned about societies interest. For instance, in majority of the countries criminals are sent to prison for a specific period of time, which gives them the opportunity to reflect upon their actions, so that in future they don't commit any crimes. Therefore, law plays a vital role to educate people.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that people who follow the law feel restricted and often end up breaking the law. As an illustration, in India it is necessary to wear helmet for safety but majority of the people wear it only to avoid penalties. Hence, law does change the way people behave.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the law highly impact our behaviour, although it has some drawbacks that should be well handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...inals are sent to prison for a specific period of time, which gives them the opportunity to re...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n their actions, so that in future they dont commit any crimes. Therefore, law plays...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94007490637 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76350187006 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6986983679 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359134777239 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140509220196 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837369612141 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213025309978 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525843673828 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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