Some people think law changes our behaviour. Discuss
These days there is an ongoing debate between about law changes our behaviour. While it is possible to claim to that rules and regulations of the government needs to followed strictly to keep up peace and harmony among people. My view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why we need to follow rules and regulations even though law changes some people behaviour. One of them is that the by following rules leads to safe and healthy environment. It can also be argued with that crime rate got reduced. It should also be taken into the account that following rules will help to country development on the basis of clean and safety environment. For example, wearing helmet, seatbelt enforces the safety measure.
Those who argue for law changes our behaviour is not fair have different view and say that it can be actually not a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that some people may feel of stress because of strict rules and regulations. Then there are concerns strict rules and regulations makes fear in human lives.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that the rules have to be followed for growth in human lives. I would strongly recommend that rules have to be followed which make sure the thriving environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81932773109 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5373594393 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5897113945 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9285714286 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182220443698 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646830041027 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109003594715 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116612305384 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770314692359 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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