It is often argued that traveling to space has become the norm in the modern times. While the vast majority of people are fascinated by the idea of space travel, others maintain that resolving existing environmental issues on our planet must be tackled first. This essay will discuss why finding immediate actions to resolve the problems in our environment is more important than space travel.
Undoubtedly, there is an ever-increasing number of environmental issues that concerns humanity today, one of which is pollution. In fact, our basic necessities to live, such as food, water and air is now becoming polluted. To cite a primary example, a recent study shows that in 2030, the level of pollution in the atmosphere, water and food sources will increase in a staggering 45 percent across the whole planet. Thus, it is quite evident that people must take drastic measures to stop pollution.
Furthermore, space missions require an enormous amount of money. As a matter of fact, only the most developed countries in the world can afford to send missions in space at a cost of trillion dollars. For example, a study shows that the recent space mission last October that was launched by the United States costs approximately 50 Trillion dollars. Thus, it is clear the space travel is extremely expensive and is a waste of money that should have been used for environmental protection.
In conclusion, the idea of traveling to space inspired many individuals, however, humanity must focus first on protecting our planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...one of which is pollution. In fact, our basic necessities to live, such as food, water and air is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09561752988 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81814432376 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.788811705 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354987535776 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119682948366 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10615101708 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208200501323 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119192462898 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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