The statement “business and commercial organizations of any kind need to work hard to help with environmental challenges that faced by the whole world.” To what extent do you agree with this? Talk about your view.
The environment plays an essential role in the wellbeing of an individual and society. The issue of whether business and commercial organizations of any kind need to work hard to help with environmental challenges has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that environmental challenges that faced by the whole world are not important, I think that environmental challenges are as important as other technical challenges. In this essay, I will put forward my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments.
To begin with, private companies spend more money to adopt environmentally friendly processes. According to a recent survey done by the Stanford University, 85% of companies benefitted by adapting environment friendly approaches, whereas 15% of organizations faced disadvantages due to it. They improved their existing scenarios extraordinarily, and that paved their way for a better economic future.
Those who assert that organizations do not need to work hard to help with environmental challenges come from the traditional way of thinking. To illustrate, they showcased the recent article in 'The Times of India' newspaper, which published that around 10% of companies are successful by focusing on technical aspects. This illustration does not give full support to their argument.
To conclude, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I suggest that commercial organizations need to work hard with environmental challenges.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, whereas, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54666666667 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33346370115 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595555555556 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9423984749 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.454545455 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365538106229 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124150177254 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13550477668 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213011278655 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100696791367 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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