Students with degrees earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion.
A matter of considerable controversy at present is whether higher qualified get higher salary or higher experience get hike in salary revision. we will discuss both side and I will give my opinion at the end of this essay.
To begin with, now day there is lots of trolling is going on government vs private employees in terms of getting money, leaves and other benefits which is most conspicuous. The administrator staff often gets higher benefits rather than company user which makes them feel uncomfortable. government staff, they get jobs through the specially conducted exams and that is the main reason they usually get higher salary compare to private one. In addition to above the degree completed student having multiple plus points and mostly they aware about the current statistical information about the entire world, which help them to keep updated themselves. In other side the candidates having low academic qualification unaware about such information, and they didn't take that much effort to stay updated with the latest technology.
On the other hand, the experience staff having much knowledge and actual field experience of handling things, or they took quick decision with help of their experience and personal ability. Might be they are less educated but compare to newly educated one, they often take good decision which help them to improve organization profit level. For example, experienced person expert in practical knowledge of equipment of current market statistics in contrast the new degree person mostly having knowledge about theoretically, which not helping to grow business compares to first one.
In conclusion, we can say that, the salary should be depend on the person knowledge and their actual work experience, compare to their education because we are aware about experience people making less mistake compare to the other one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30201342282 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67073620083 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.997626105 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.636363636 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152235730709 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595191388897 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300474977131 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848600532478 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321629798416 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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