Study requires peace, comfort, which means it is impossible for a student to combine learning with employment.
What’s your opinion?
Nowadays, whether it is impossible to study while being employed has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the general public, some people believe that a comfortable environment should be provided for students, while others hold the view that students taking part time jobs could be beneficial. In my opinion, I am more inclined towards the idea that the combination of study and work is better.
Firstly, financial hardship is commonly witnessed amongst students, they are often supported financially by their family which means they are not financially dependent. Being an adolescent is often tempted to purchase all sorts of fancy products and therefore, having a part time job will definitely relieve some financial stress.
Moreover, another factor that should be considered is that an appropriate amount of stress and challenges are healthy especially for students. If students live in a worry free lifestyle, they can lose motivation which could result in academic failure. For example a friend of mine lived a stress free lifestyle and he ended up failing many examinations and assignments.
In conclusion, everyone needs a bit of stress and having a part time job while studying can certainly bring positive impacts because students can learn how to become financially independent and they surely require some challenges which will facilitate their growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...oversies and drawn the attention of the general public, some people believe that a comfortable...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...hers hold the view that students taking part time jobs could be beneficial. In my opinion...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... fancy products and therefore, having a part time job will definitely relieve some financ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...yone needs a bit of stress and having a part time job while studying can certainly bring ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 31.9359605911 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47685185185 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87898572651 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0811834537 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.875 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.25397266985 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186583507822 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714424609115 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467437565625 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103263842513 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545389467246 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.