Some people think that life experience is more important than the formal education provided in schools and universities. How far do you agree with this statement, and provide examples?
Nowadays, whether life experience outweighs the importance of formal education has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public.
Some believe real life experience plays a more significant role in one's life, others believe proper education helps youngsters to develop better.
Personally, I am more inclined towards formal education is more important and this essay will elaborate further.
Education is the quickest way to obtain knowledge. Completion of education requires 12 years and it certainly plays a big part in everyone's life.
It sets as solid foundations for the future as it equips us with critical thinking ability, ability to handle failure and time management skills.
For example, if we were placed in the real world without proper education, most of us would crash and burn in the beginning.
Moreover, school is not just simply about math and science, there is more to it.
School enables us to develop holistically, we can learn sports, academic subjects, how to socialize with peers and music.
The real world does not allow us to do that, it is an extremely stressful environment.
For example, when I stepped into the real world, my life is left with work and rest, there is hardly any chance for me to try something new.
In conclusion, I hold the view that formal education is more important than real life experience. To address these issues, governments and society should make concerted effort to seek solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...rience plays a more significant role in ones life, others believe proper education h...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22175732218 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7839835831 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6962930765 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259896312144 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850540617128 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682092823597 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900853900387 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562146310996 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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