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Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause

Essay topics: Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?

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Sports play an important role to keep a person fit and healthy; both mentally and physically. Team sports specially supports a person to build up his character. Some people opine that despite of aforementioned good qualities, team sports cause hate and rivalry between the team players as well as the supportive fans. This essay will discuss the both sides, and hence will go for a conclusion.

To start with, team sports such as Soccer or Rugby necessarily keeps a person strong and healthy. The players go through routine workouts and consume healthy meals that help them to stay in a good physical condition. Same time, they undergo meditation programs which lift up their mental health. Discipline is also a must in a team players character. Likewise, team sports support a person to stay fit physically as well as mentally.

On the flip side, there is certainly a hate or hard feelings about the opposite team members and supporters. Each side tries to lead their team towards victory. But only one team will win. There, a rivalry can be build up among the two opponents. But if the players are well disciplined, the losing team will bear up the loss quietly. Again, the discipline is practiced because of the team sports.

To sum up, team sports do have both good and bad influence towards players as well as the supporters. This essay discussed the both sides and clearly the pros overweigh the cons. Hence in conclusion I opine that, despite the violence or rival among players, team sports do support the players to stay healthy physically as well as mentally.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...th. Discipline is also a must in a team players character. Likewise, team sports suppor...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nd clearly the pros overweigh the cons. Hence in conclusion I opine that, despite the...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87732342007 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55990539446 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5633269147 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8888888889 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239251398673 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828880722277 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810851723153 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160516762644 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678604376363 0.0609392437508 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.1260098522 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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