technological inventions come out on a daily basis. take one example and discuss its advantages and disadvantages
In this tech-savvy era, people are becoming more advanced in using technology and the internet has changed the communication system with many beneficial effects. Some people believe that technological inventions are a boom to the society while others argue that it a curse to the society. I believe that technology invention in communication has a brought an enormous change in the people, even though there are some disadvantages to it.
On the positive side, in last decade communication system has developed with many advanced options, people can communicate with all over the world by using the internet and learn many new inventions and discoveries all around the world. According to the survey conducted by a mobile company, over the last decade, more than 80% of sales increased in mobile and other communication gadgets which easily accessible to the internet.
On the negative side, some people are using the date which shared in social media to hack the people and personal information. Spending more time in social networking sites is waste of time and people are not spending the time to their own and important work by social media and passing the more unwanted viral information which is not useful to the society.
In the conclusion, there are massive advantages to communication, every good invention has some negative shade, but it very helpful to people who are using it in proper ways and gives more knowledge about everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which is not useful to the society. In the conclusion, there are massive adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16877637131 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83584485801 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527426160338 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4146201209 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.125 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848300812125 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481519741143 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569083909436 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563051224317 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559795514648 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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