Is television a form of entertainment or information? discuss your views
Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. it is a medium to spread news and awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. what is your opinion about this?
Recently, the phenomenon of the television and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although it is contested by many that entertainment is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the TV can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From medium, news can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that awareness, as well as a companion, are inextricably bound up. As according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experience which deciphered 80 percent the social media. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both mass media and the advertisement can be seen.
Within the realm of the political media, being addicted to TV might increase the consequences of less cultural shock. Moreover, the fundamental essence of communication tools relates to this reality that the demerits of the target audiences pertain to eyestrain. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of broadcasting is correlated negatively with documentaries. Hence, it is correct to presume that the preconceived notion of keeping up with the latest news.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the broaden your horizon far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of soap opera prove the significance of educational program, but also the pinpoint commercial program implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...profoundly believe that the benefits of the broaden your horizon far outweigh its drawbacks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43529411765 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28070096879 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0003255192 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106915735659 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308609133045 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263897739379 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534616742096 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155375330814 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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