Television has two roles to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point view with details from your own experience, observation or reading.
media plays a pivotal role among modern society. The importance of televisions and other media in the modern world is an inevitable factor. television has many advantages and disadvantages in the society. this essay will discuss the how televisions play an important role in the society and it will help the people in different ways.
Predominantly, the role of media irrespective of age and gender is equally important, especially in this fast paced community. which can entertain us , even which can provide lots of information through its different channels such as news channels and many related to education. it can be easily accessible in this savvy world as it became more advanced with lots of technology. For instance, live television programs help us to know the things happening in the world at the same time and which may help us to solve many disasters.So, people can facilitate its advantage everywhere in the world.
On the other hand, it may make children addicted to the channel programs and series as they keeps continuity for their program. These addiction may affect school students in their studies and in the lack memory power. For instance, the cartoon channels make children addicted to some characters and always insist them to watch every time. we can observe it from the children under 10 years old.
The television has many advantages and disadvantages in the end. But the utilization is important and the way we follow channel truths and their reports, because it has the tendency to change people mind and attitude. SO, in my opinion, follow the good side of the television as it can give more effective information specifically and as early as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06071428571 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82713281092 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3878631263 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134421099318 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460980811377 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301620687299 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776462398021 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335974314532 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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