Polygamy has led to massive divorce rates around the globe. Give the possible option for this issue and various solutions to reduce the rate.
polygamy is a system which are found among some religions and in few countries. These kind of marriage practices leads to many divorces than earlier years throughout the world. there are various possible options to reduce this problems. this essay will discuss the various possibilities to avoid increasing number of divorces in the world.
In the modernized era, people are becoming more selfish and enjoying their life with the advancement of technology. They are not giving any moral values to the life and just moving forward with the world. so, the number of divorces are increasing and the remarriage rates are going up among the youngsters. polygamy is not acceptable as it has some disadvantages in personal life. The multiple life partners had become a trend in the fast past few decades, yet it can spoil personal life by causing mental distress among couple, jealousy among husbands and wife moreover, this can even leads to conflicts and fights among them.
Family life is important in everyone's life but with one partner beacause if the people are not adjusting each other will cause more problems among the individual and can lead to divorces. so, to avoid the divorce rates, better to object the rights of polygamy. In addition, government should make some laws for the people who strongly believes in polygamy and make a practice of getting consent from the immediate partner.
there are many issues behind polygamy which can even lead to mental disorders to the partners and leads to increased divorces. so, in my opinion, governments should establish some laws to control polygamy to reduce divorce rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09328358209 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55270518127 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4616425287 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182820752467 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759566803867 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836890925684 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116922016562 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068206342887 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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