Any new technological development in recent years is a boosting or drag for the society in general. Do you agree or disagree that mass media, like TV, radio and newspaper have a huge impact on people, especially young generation? What is your opinion? Provide reason and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In this savvy era, technology takes an eminent role among the people throughout the world. There are various medias such as news paper, email, computers and TV which have a huge impact on people as it helps the people in one or in another way in their life. This essay will discuss how social media influenced the people in the 21st century.
In this technologically influence world, people depends more on mass medias such as internet and television as it help them to get all the information at their finger tips. The technical development of these mass media helps the people a lot in their professional life as it helps to reduce the work load of the people with the help of computers and, the emails which help us to transfer the information at any corner of the world within a fraction of second.
In addition to this, the mass medias provides lots of applications to the people. For instance, the people can see each other and talk at any time with the help of different softwares and applications used in the computers and in mobile. Moreover, can get all the information from each and every corner of the world with the help of television and news reports
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...world. There are various medias such as news paper, email, computers and TV which have a h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y in their life. This essay will discuss how social media influenced the people i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he work load of the people with the help of computers and, the emails which help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63942307692 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56479908408 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0350245959 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101380149657 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534530492699 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354720276156 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751015042068 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0099799031421 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.1260098522 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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