extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. agree or disagree?
In this competitive world people are running behind the fame and popularity, they do many things to become famous in the society. there are many people with extreme talents and adventurous spirits and skill, turn towards the areas such as skiing, monkey jumping and parachuting ans so on. In this essay will discuss why extreme sports are dangerous and whether it needs to banned.
To begin with, there are many people who wish to do dangerous sports like skiing and monkey jumping. these are interesting game those who have specific skills and mind power as it requires more physical and mental capacity. moreover, there are some people who do these kind of activities for name and money not on the interests or skills, especially young generation people.
On the other hand, these adventurous sports are interesting which can help many people to increase their self-confidence and ability to work in a group. however, these items need more practices and training from an expert trainer, moreover, the protective equipment to be purchased which can be expensive for the middle class family.
In conclusion, the extreme sports have many advantages and disadvantages in the society, however, the benefits outweight the demerits, so the government can help the people who are interested in these kind of activities with proper guidance and training, also, by making proper policies and rule for the benefit of the people who can also help the government to increase their funding. so, in my opinion, extreme sports should not be banned which should be encouraged with proper safety protection and measurements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17557251908 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67415377659 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2351563386 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1620040704 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722980616711 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763477132182 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948048232188 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414102571208 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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