Any new technological development in the recent years is a boosting or drag for the society in general. Do you agree or disagree that Mass Media, Like TV, Radio and Newspaper have a huge impact on people, especially young generation? What is your opinion? Provide reason and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
In this savvy era, technology takes an eminent role among the people throughout the world. There are various medias such as news paper, email, computers and TV which have a huge impact on people as it helps the people in one or in another way in their life. This essay will discuss how social media influenced the people in the 21st century.
In this technologically influenced world, people depends more on mass medias such as internet and television as it help them to get all the information at their finger tips. The technical development of these mass media helps the people a lot in their professional life as it helps to reduce the work load of the people with the help of computers and, the emails which help us to transfer he information at any corner of the world within a fraction of second.
In addition to this, the mass medias provides lots of applications to the people. For instance, the people can see each other and talk at any time with the help of different softwares and applications used in the computers and in mobile. Moreover, can get all the information from each and every corner of the world with the help of television and news reports
In conclusion, the mass media provides a lot of information to the society even which can influence the people negatively, the benefits always outweigh the negativity. In my opinion, mass media has a huge impact among the younger generation that the elders, though encourage the people to use these mass media in a good manner not allow to get influence by the negative information provided by the medias.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...world. There are various medias such as news paper, email, computers and TV which have a h...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...e mass media in a good manner not allow to get influence by the negative information p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64272044105 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0754620721 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.9669160288 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138977351528 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708545899986 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413158231232 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941218641959 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321506118327 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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