Polygamy has led to massive divorce rates around the globe. Give the possible option for this issue and various solutions to reduce the rate.
In past days, men are always dominance to this world in different phase of life and remain leader in his region. While it is possible to claim that polygamy becomes the conspicuous reason for divorce cases. Men always make all decisions related to his family and don't consult his life-mate while getting polygamy status. I shall discuss this argument in detail and provide a logical conclusion.
Firstly, There are multifarious reason which has attracted the status of men to polygamy and result into divorce. One of them is sedative to woman's beauty which cause man to forget all responsibilities and creates a difference from his existing wife. As dominance factor, Man always follow his choice and cause to second or more marriages cause to status polygamy. For example, there are many kings who got many queens, such as kings, Bahrain's king. In addition, people don't make a distance but get inspiration which cause weaken and form a less stringent to act as right law to live in this world.
Secondly, there are many solutions and interconnected with religions. The regime of religions are bounded with their life terms and duties. These duties are covered by stringent laws which have tied the men and women to some conditions. These are amendment as latest law does not allow until first wife doesn't allow for second marriage. For example, the case of polygamy is less as compared to early decades. Second solution is to implement literacy in public. Public should be awarded to norms and conditions of relations after marriage.
In recapitulation, in my personal view, polygamy is a bitter relation while you are tied to first wife. It should not be emphasized and norms must be reviewed on crime basis. I would recommend stringent law must be issued against wrong doing person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62045585517 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7596759116 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.3684210526 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108088152855 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350354981787 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399919029821 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635688123061 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305177518588 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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