These days some people are involved in dangerous activities such as extreme skiing, motorcycles jumping, Are you in favor? If yes then why?
Whenever I see a dangerous stunt in the movies, I get goosebumps. My first reaction is, “Is this possible.” So the seeds of excitement have increased by curiosity to attempt the stunt. On the contrary, another part of the mind tells me not to be foolish as the stunt may get me killed. So, extreme sports are dangerous, and one has to be careful while performing it.
One should be aware of the limits, like beyond this it may be risky. Taking part in extreme activities will help one in overcoming the adrenaline rush. Many tourists are booking extreme skiing activities in one of the best ski resorts around the world. In the beginning, these games are terrifying but as time passes one gets used to it. Moreover, this risk-taking factors helps in tackling stressful situations in our routine life.
If we are afraid of death, then our life will become hell. One has to master own fears and enjoy the gifted life. There are many sports like football and cricket, which has seen the death of players on the field. But cricket and football are not extreme activities. Hence, there are possibilities that you may survive even by playing extreme sports. Some are fortunate enough to get popular by creating world records or by becoming experts in extreme sports.
In recapitulate, by following safety precautions, the players can avoid minor or major injuries. Before going for skiing, the participants must be aware of the dangerous slopes, how one might get injured and others. Following the passion blindly can land you in trouble.
It is advisable to practice a lot before competing with others because practice makes one perfect. To be on the safer side perform extreme sports along with experts or professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90784982935 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6878687858 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1288310136 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117240809753 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356786652537 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032061207016 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587715722845 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272042578257 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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