Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this contemporary world , the number of crimes are burgeoning. There are numerous number of crimes are reported by the social medias and the newspapers daily such as homicides and robberies whereas some people are slip out from the laws and punishment due to their higher political power. This essay will discuss whether capital punishment can help to control the crimes in the society.
To begin with, the alarming rate of crime or the violence are increasing daily in the society. The main reason for increasing the crime is due the backbone support from the higher authorities or due to political power of an individual or organization. For instance, the cases are documented in the court it may be a murder, harassment or a rape cases may be under a person or a group of people, these may be investigated under a special group of people and may the criminals get arrested by the police, since their higher political power influences here and the criminals come out with bail.
However, crimes can not be controlled among the society until the victims get security in the world. So that, the criminals should be punished under the specific law which can be even a capital punishment according to the seriousness of the crime. The myriad of crimes can only be controlled by the proper capital punishment. Though capital punishment is not acceptable,it is essential to reduce the number of violence in the society and for the protection of the citizens.
In conclusion, capital punishment is good for the criminal cases, but not for all the violence in the society. In my opinion, to reduce the murders or homicides by political parties for any organisations capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96232876712 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81325987999 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7581133315 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286682897458 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136950773521 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850726931694 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197267505152 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087382602484 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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