Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Crime rate is a menace that each country faces. Violent crime has been climbing steadily for a long time and in the future governments need to prevent with more restriced laws. This essay will discuss why capital punishment is crucial to stop violence in community.
Nowadays, with the common use of technology, we read and hear a lot of violence news over the world. We are witnessing various crimes such as rape, murder, pedophilia, genocide and more. They are not can be called as simple crimes. The world we are living in is becoming less secure and insufferable. People are scared and they do emphaty about these bad news. And they want to live in peace with the society. The death penalty can be intimidating for people who is prone to violence. And thus, controlling violence is one of the significant task that may be concerned by the governments.
Since even the countries which their community structure is capable to do harsh violance has the capital punishment in their laws. Several researchs are discovered about these society have the lowest education rate. Areas has the lowest education rate is the most crime that can be seen in. So capital punishment must be in a collaboration with education. In my opinion, capital punishment can be dissuasive to some extent. To solve this problem and to decrease crime rate, governments also need to inform and educate people well.
In conclusion, capital punishment is necessary for uneducated society. But it is also significant to keep people live in peace together. Composure of the society is entrusted by governments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00377358491 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76934858095 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4607338402 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.3 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 2.75862068966 544% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310003100017 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841957803815 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072322113871 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171867970135 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205535092403 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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