Some countries are adopting cashless systems as credit cards being used instead of money. Discuss the benefits and disadvantages in your opinion.
In 21th century, we cannot live without consumption. Some countries encouraged people to use credit and debit cards. This replacement have advangates and disadvantages in our lives. This essay will further present in both views and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
With the development of technology, every people carry credit cards in their pocket. Even people use their cards on transportation with bus. Daily life is becoming quick-tempered. Technology lets us to save our times in many fields. They are myraid of points to explain why cashless system important is. Firstly, people do not have to carry small changes in their pocket. Secondly, credit cards can be more trustworthy than cash money. People can be more safe versus purse-snatching. And they can see how much they spent on their smartphones by clicking bank accounts applications. It takes the advantage of vulnerability of their cashless systems.
However, carrying only debit cards can be stressful sometimes. Even we are living in technology century, sometimes internet connections may be lost. Cyber POS devices can occur unexpected issues. And then, credit cards can be hacked. According to the argument aforementioned before, credit cards can be more trushworthy in real life, but there are cyber thieves around the world. People need to be prepared for these kind of situations. They need to keep in touch with their banks.
In conclusion, there are more cashless systems that people are in such as credit cards, bitcoin and etc. It is our inevitable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25403225806 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89696625827 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6551724138 182% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4358602522 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.652173913 104.977214359 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7826086957 20.9669160288 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221523150929 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629951592654 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673451396662 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129864188534 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013572409964 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 53.1260098522 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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