Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
In 21th century, education has various options. Some parents believe that homeschooling is better choice to raise their children. But some parents believe that formal education is crucial. This essay will discuss why the formal education is essential for the children.
Today, children are burdened to have good education and it must be in a collaboration with social skills. Formal education begins with pre-school which is important for growing healthy for kids. In my opinion, pre-school, secondary school and highschool are the main education steps that everyone needs to climb. These steps are very significant for gaining social abilities. Children at the same age can teach beneficial things to each other. For example, if one kid knows to tying shoes, he/she can teach his friend at the pre-school. This also express their communication skills, friendship skills, perception of working together and helping each other. Mankind need to be social in their lives.
On the other side, some parents believe that homeschooling is better option for their children. Teaching at home can be like private session but it can cause to blind children’s social skills. With the light of recent survey, homeschooled children do not want to share anything with their friends. And they are apprehensive about their same age. They are growing in isolated area and that can cause xenophobia in their future life.
In conclusion, homeschooling can be related to better education but going school is more advantageous in social point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'blinding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: blinding
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34426229508 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78391838219 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569672131148 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2540181377 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4444444444 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269856336686 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874214917049 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690736167913 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157554437505 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481784630871 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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