Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are youngsters role model. Do you support it or not?
In the modern era , hero-worship among the people is a highly debatable topic. It is a new trend among young generations to imitate successful sports starts or beautiful film stars. However, there are some merits as well as there are some demerits behind this topic. This essay will discuss why hero-worship is good and bad among young people.
Imitating famous people is a common thing among the modern world, most of the people follow their life and make them as role models. But, it is always not good. We know very little thing about these people through social medias, by newspaper or through channel programs. They do not show their real character in front of the camera. Most of them follow unhealthy lifestyles and may misguide us by spending millions of dollars for their personal lifestyle and by extramarital affairs. These can be influenced by the middle class people those who are not able to afford this luxury life style.
However, there are some celebrities who earn a lot of money and do some charity work in the society. They help people with all mindfulness. People who adore these kind of people may guid them to become a good citizen. Moreover, people who follows them deeply can learn a lot of things like how to become a successful man in the society and how can we make our goal. For instance, we some sports stars or films actors who started from the low-level and became at the top-level with their passion and humbleness.
Finally, hero-worship is not a sin, but there should be a limit for everything and try to adopt the positive sides of their life. Simple admire is good but the problem starts when we imitate everything they do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.735395189 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43387883532 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5255159531 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878282545473 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266645751659 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421494777768 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495353874046 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256452706298 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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