There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
The best and fundamental invention is a question of a considerable number of people and becomes a controversial issue among the public. Although a large number of inhabitants argued that some recent medicine are the best inventions, others hold different views and state that the Internet is the greatest invention which has invented since now. I am inclined to profoundly believe that this idea is strongly true though it has both some merits and demerits.
There are several reasons why Internet is advantageous. First and foremost, it explodes communications. For instance, the speed and the quality of communications were not desirable in the past, but in these days if you have an access to Internet, you will communicate with everyone in every place fastly and efficiently. Furthermore, this invention makes dwellers' lives more easier than past. Namely, a plethora of shopping is done by Internet without giong to shops, populations who want to go on a trip can book hotels, airplanes, taxies, trains, resturants and some other things like these in a mintue by using Internet. Hence, it has a large number of beneficial effects on our lives.
On the one hand, there is no doubt it has some disadvantages as well and one of the most significant ones is, it provides easy access to blue sites and this issue is not acceptable in families and has some catastrophic impacts for the youths. Moreover, it increases laziness. Due to a significant number of facilities which are provided by the Internet for settlers and because every thing is accessable, the citizen's physical activities are diminished by this invention. Therfore, the more easier, the more lazier.
In conclusion, while Internet has some demerits, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ersial issue among the public. Although a large number of inhabitants argued that some recent med...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...the past, but in these days if you have an access to Internet, you will communicate with ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...re, this invention makes dwellers lives more easier than past. Namely, a plethora of shoppi...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mintue by using Internet. Hence, it has a large number of beneficial effects on our lives. On ...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nished by this invention. Therfore, the more easier, the more lazier. In conclusion, whi...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lazier
...vention. Therfore, the more easier, the more lazier. In conclusion, while Internet has s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15517241379 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97300778128 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7840769366 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142901169236 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458440119417 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470307117412 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750607396386 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383921700298 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.