There are many global problems. What is the most pressing problem? What solution would you suggest?
Recently, the phenomenon of "there are many global problems" and its corresponding impact has sparked a long-running dispute. Whereas many people are debating the proposition that pressing problems might be remarkably fruitful, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a remarkable number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that avoiding climate change can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the technological standpoint, the information technology as the most pressing problem can provide the society with profound effects, which might stem from the fact that the computer networks and the Internet are inextricably bound up. Regarding my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment that discovered the effects of the most pressing problem in the world. Thus, invaluable ramifications of both social networks and the worldwide web distinctly can be observed.
Within the realm of climate science, without the slightest doubt, global warming as the most pressing problem might exacerbate the already catastrophic consequences of climate change. Moreover, fundamental aspects of global problems can relate to the reality that the demerits of sea-level rising can pertain to melting icebergs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that if the downsides of greenhouse-gas emissions were correlated positively with renewable energy, the local authorities would ultimately address fossil-fuel problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the preconceived notion of using electric vehicles.
To conclude, despite several compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea that the merits of many global problems far outweigh its downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd its corresponding impact has sparked a long-running dispute. Whereas many people are debati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84758364312 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20232119625 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0660752771 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255090238401 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846423189431 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617836294151 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145849388367 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00862817490846 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 11.5310837438 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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