The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?

Essay topics: The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?

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The importance of time distribution between people’s work and their personal life, which was always debatable, now has become more controversial. The substantial influence of time allocation of work and life has sparked the controversy of the potential impact of this trend on the whole society in recent years. It can be agreed that this phenomenon is very widespread, and it will cause some problems. This essay will elaborate on how an unbalanced time distributing is prevalent in the IT industry and how it causes a higher divorce rate, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerable reasons why unbalanced time distribution between people’s work and their personal life is common, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it is prevalent in the IT industry. As an illustration, the research has invariably revealed that there are 76% of the United States’ IT programmer saying that they can’t cope with their work and family at the same time due to the high workload. Therefore, people’s time distribution problem is prevalent in the IT industry.
Nevertheless, some people adopt the same view and tend to believe that the shortage of time will cause some serious problems as there are innumerable reasons but the most salient one is that high divorce rate. For instance, the statistical report has completely stated that the divorce rate of the United Kingdom has a dramatically increase four times compared with 2017 after the shortage of time has become a widespread problem in most of the families. Thus, the lack of time causes a higher divorce rate.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of the shortage of time is prominent, although the higher divorce rate should be well handled.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9663537446 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9094979634 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414017235509 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169979289701 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573327750462 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236288334102 0.151781067708 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918635753107 0.0609392437508 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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