The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement, a dialogue on not taking care of their family or personal life can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my view is that irrespective of numerous arguments that exist on either sides. people should equally take care so they can keep thier personal life though happy. through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the argument.
Firstly, people mainly devote in their job because to earn and take care of their personal life or their family but they forget them and try to concentrate on earning more money. as we are in twenty first centurey many children's are not guided by their parents because they are busy earning, instead of taking care of their kids or advising them the good habbits, they grow without knowing what is good and bad. many house husbands are not taking care of their wives or not spending lesiure time.
There are many disadvantages people should earn but also they should try to spend time with their family by taking them vacation or spending time with them. father should spend some time to teach some good habits to their childrens and they should advice how to behave in alternate places so they can be better in future.
Finally, i see there is a potential evidence that i have provided hence, my opineon people should also spend time with their family by taking them a vacation or spending time with them so it is benefit for both the sides they can also feel relax from the work stress
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75185185185 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35256332196 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514814814815 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8743788469 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162907760169 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721055238558 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430375753167 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107933891116 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202111934931 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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