In town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
These days the culture of shopping malls in towns and cities is booming on a rapid pace which has created a heated debate. It is argued that whether or not large shopping complex should replace the small shops in the cities or towns. This essay will discuss the reasons why shopping malls should replace the local vendors and also why it should not.
To commence with, replacement of small local shops by large shopping malls comes up with few benefits. More specifically, these complexes render their customers with time saving benefits by availing several products, for instance, from groceries to apparels under one roof. Thus, when large shopping malls offer such benefits to customers then there is no harm in replacing small vendors by them in towns.
However, there are certain hidden pitfalls also does exist in replacement of small local shops by these grand malls. It is quiet apparent that opening of these malls will lead to shut down of small local businesses which are already established due to which economic crisis may arise in the local market. Myriad small vendors, for example, will be out of their business and hence there will be no earnings for them. And in short, it may create a havoc situation among the small merchants.
This essay has argued that how replacement of small businesses can offer saving of time for customer's purchasing while it may also lead to economic crisis for small vendors. To my way of opinion, replacement of these small shops by large shopping malls should be done with utmost care by keeping in mind the economic benefits for small vendors as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33945235924 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509157509158 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6165503128 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3550745069 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156423586687 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103194823289 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245715975403 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663672912851 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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