“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Recently, the trend of being vegetarian is booming among people. Some people consider vegetarian eating as more ethical than eating meat while others do not brace this notion. This essay will describe the reasons why vegetarianism is much more ethical than being meat eater.
To commence with, vegetarianism is far more ethical than being non-vegetarianism due to several reasons. Eating veggies does not involve killing of innocent animals. For instance, millions of chickens are being killed worldwide just for human consumption. In short, by not killing animals for our food is indeed an ethical act.
In addition, vegetarianism also lead to grow more plants which is also ethical. For human consumption, growing of vegetation is far more beneficial for the environment. To exemplify, beef cattle is contributing to destruction of top soil which can harm our environment adversely in various perspectives. Thus, by growing the habits of eating vegetarian food, human being may contribute towards ethical deed by protecting our environment.
This essay has discussed how an individual can be more ethical by not killing the animals or contributing to environment by growing vegetables through the adoption of vegetarianism. To my way of opinion, I strongly believe that being vegetarianism is much more ethical than being a meat eater.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44497607656 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10548800802 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1921009092 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20693593647 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834213723965 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685283728883 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140636858744 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539132750779 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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