“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.

There is a never ending debate on whether vegetarianism is more ethical than non-vegetarianism. While people on both sides of the statement may have their own reasons, I absolutely agree that following vegetarianism is more moral than eating meat.

First, people who eat plant-based diet are implicitly being moral over those who eat animal-based diet. This is because not eating meat means animals are not killed just for the sake of feeding humans. Since human beings are also a kind of animal, we have no moral rights to kill other animals just to satisfy our appetite. Thus, by not contributing to the killing of animals, we are choosing to be morally responsible towards the nature.

Second, being a vegetarian comes as a natural choice for many people. In fact, humans are, by nature, vegetarian. If one looks into the physiology of humans, they do not have the kinds of teeth and digestive systems that are typical of carnivores. If people eat meat, then they are going against the nature. This has lead to issues such as deterioration of human digestive function over time as well as increased aggression. Hence, it's advisable to follow vegetarianism.

To sum up, people eating meat may want to justify their reasons for doing so, but on ethical grounds, being a vegetarian is absolutely a natural thing to practice as a human being.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95154185022 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83672393065 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1152144312 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143671937433 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052812179066 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548786308775 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103764031597 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671692914002 0.0609392437508 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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