In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well.
These days, there is a heated debate among people about the importance of tourism in underdeveloped countries. There are a great number of individuals who interpret the impacts of tourism as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that mass tourism is beneficial for the growth of a country’s economy and development of relationships among countries.
There is no skepticism surrounding the fact that tourism plays a pivotal role in economic growth and infrastructure. To be more precise, tourism industry is considered as a significant source of revenue by providing different job opportunities and increasing foreign exchange earnings. Moreover, this industry would imply an increasing need various services such as water sanitation, road connectivity and well-equipped hospitals. Therefore, this inevitably forces the government to accelerate the development of infrastructure.
In other words, tourism promotes international understanding and cooperation among nations. This is to say that tourism industry would open borders among countries a tremendous number of people with diverse cultures from various geographical locations are able to interact with each other, which consequently promotes the peace across the world. To be more specific, a survey conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that western citizen could enhance the basic intellectual abilities of young generation in developing countries.
In a nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that tourism would economically and socially benefit the developing countries. Hence, I strongly believe that the merits of tourism far outweigh its drawbacks. It is recommended that local authorities take cognizance of these facts and enhance their infrastructure in order to attract more visitors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91760299625 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39593614118 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8264239486 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190300614138 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648731874579 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046041247649 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109534344336 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299956111567 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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