University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
The Trend of studying in other countries is currently increasing as part of the higher education.
Although, the student has the opportunity to learn the new culture and language, but the cost of living is more expensive. In my opinion, studying abroad is more beneficial even though it is costly.
The greatest benefit of studying abroad is that students will have exposure to learn the new culture and they are good at writing , reading and speaking the new language. Being in another country requires people to push themselves to adapt the new environment to survive. For example, one of my sister was struggled to learn the new language and culture when she went to pursue her master's degree.
Drawback of studying abroad is cost of living. Some of the people are struggling with expenses like room rent, food, travel, personal expenditure. So they are forced to do the part time job while studying and some people has the good family background to manage the studies. For example, as told earlier she went for part time job while she was doing her master's degree.
To conclude that studying in overseas has become very more common now a days. While studying students will face more barriers, it is in fact these barriers are the main advantage of studying abroad which is personal growth. Therefore , the students experience more advantages and disadvantages while studying in abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00858369099 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58271581963 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536480686695 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0805405358 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7692307692 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362985793654 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141392451617 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119886924637 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196443133463 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886090879882 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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